Monday, April 20, 2015

blog 4 quarter 4



                                                          A shocker on shock street
                                                          by: R.L Stine 




             In the book that i am reading called A Shocker on Shock Street. Erin and Marty were looking around in different doors and try to find a way off of Shock street. so what they found out is that there is no way off of Shock Street. so then they found out that the dad was watching them and  then shuts them down and what then later found out was that they were robots  the whole story so what the dad did was he wanted to fix them but it wouldn't work so he made new robots. The dad found out that the robots were broken because in the beginning they were talking about a mother  to go on the ride with them and then  that is what Erin and Marty did  was they started saying how  robots want live as well and they didn't want to be shut down.



          I think this book is a good book because when you read this book sometimes you might get a chilling feeling and when you get into it you just wanna keep on getting better as well as knowing that you are reading such a spooky story and you get that chill feeling that you get when you think that there is a ghost  around you or in a room with you but you don't thing about it until it actually start to get closer and closer  to you or . Marty is kind of a person who gets scared easily and i know this because in the story it says " Erin this is scary and when he grabs Erin by her arm she said Marty stop you are hurting my arm ow let go." Erin is not as scared as Marty  is and i know this because in the book it says that " i am only scared of where wolf's and that is all and i love scary movies." and this proves that Erin is more brave than Marty is  and this also proves that Marty is scared of everything and Erin isn't

Friday, April 17, 2015

Would we be killed response



            Native  Americans were marginalized because in the story  it says that Ota Kte's father was tricked by captain Pratt.  Native Americans were being treated badly.  In the article it says, " he also planned to "civilize"  them to strip them of their traditions and ways of life."  This proves that Native Americans were treated badly. Another thing  is that the Native Americans were not allowed to keep their native name  they had to change their name to an American name. I know this  because in the article it says "  Ota Kte was given the name of  Luther and for his last  name it was Standing Bear."   His name meant a lot it mean plenty kills  and it also meant "savage". this means that Ota Kte was a different person. 





            the purpose of Shanice telling this story is because she wanted people to know how she lived and what she did for fun   and how hard she works in her life to do good  and try not to get bored and she wanted people to know how smart she is. I know this because in the Article  it says " I go fishing and i am really good all i do is poke the water with a pitch fork and then we get lots of fish" and this proves that she is really good at fishing  and she knows what she does Another thing that it says in the Article is" the thing around my horses face is to get flies out of it's eyes and so it don't get hurt" and this proves that the thing on the horse is supposed to keep the horses eyes safe and so they don't get hurt.








Sunday, April 12, 2015

blog 3 quarter 4



                                                         A SHOCKER ON SHOCK STREET

                                                         by: R.L. STINE





    in the book that i am reading called A SHOCKER ON SHOCK STREET  Marty and Erin ask the dad if they can ride on the ride and the dad said yes but then Erin asks is her mom can go on the ride and he said " No only you 2 are allowed on the ride" so the next day Erin and Marty go in the morning to go on the ride and the dad says "use these laser guns if you are to get in any trouble" and then Erin's dad pressed the go button and Erin looked at Marty then at her dad and said "Trouble what kind of trouble"  so then while on the ride they were having fun and screaming and then the ride completely stops and goes again. The second time that the ride stopped they got out of the tram and try to push it to a different point.




the conflict in the book is that the dad kept on yelling at the kids even if they didn't even do anything  and i know this because in the beginning more towards the middle of the book the dad says stuff like "no only you can go on the ride and "no one is allowed in my work ship ever. And this proves that Erin's dad is a mean and angry person because of him yelling too much at Erin and Marty " He is Crazy" says Erin. The conflict in the book is person vs person  and that proves that the dad is very mean and angry towards the kids in the book.











blog2 quarter4



a shocker on shock street 
by R.L. Stine




            

   In the book that i am reading called a shocker on shock street is about a boy named Marty who was walking through his friend Erin's dad's workshop which he allows  no one in his work shop at any time. At one point Marty grabbed his friends Erin's shirt and said this is scary Erin. When Erin told Marty to stop he just kept on grabbing her arm again. Erin's dad  caught them in his workshop he yelled at the both of them saying "what did i say about going in my work shop no one is never allowed in my workshop ever" And Erin said to her dad " dad stop yelling you know i don't like that" so then Erin's friend Marty asks Erin's dad what is this thing and he said that it was  a car for a ride that he was building.



     In the book that i am  reading called a shocker on shock street Marty is a very scary person and i know this because in the book on the first page it said " Erin Marty said while pulling on my shirt". and this proves that   Marty gets scared too easy.   Erin is a nice person and i know this because in the book it says that she is patient with Marty becuase Marty moves slow when he is scared . And this proves ths he is nice and patient with people.

Wednesday, April 1, 2015

Tolerance

Tolerance= The ability or willingness to allow the existence, occurrence, or practice of something, in particular the existence of opinions or behaviors that one does not necessarily agree with 





 to me tolerance means accepting other peoples beliefs like  someone being Muslim and other people not liking the Muslims religion and beliefs. I can be tolerant because i get along with a lot of people it is just when i am trying to make a friend with a new student  sometime i make a friend with them but then some of the people who be mean to me tell the new students don't talk to her because she is a loser or don't talk to her because no one likes her   and that makes me sometime mad so sometimes what i do is i just want to break down and cry but what i do instead is close my eyes and take a deep breathe and open my eyes and i feel all better and then let my day go on  and that is what tolerance means to me.