Sunday, April 12, 2015

blog 3 quarter 4



                                                         A SHOCKER ON SHOCK STREET

                                                         by: R.L. STINE





    in the book that i am reading called A SHOCKER ON SHOCK STREET  Marty and Erin ask the dad if they can ride on the ride and the dad said yes but then Erin asks is her mom can go on the ride and he said " No only you 2 are allowed on the ride" so the next day Erin and Marty go in the morning to go on the ride and the dad says "use these laser guns if you are to get in any trouble" and then Erin's dad pressed the go button and Erin looked at Marty then at her dad and said "Trouble what kind of trouble"  so then while on the ride they were having fun and screaming and then the ride completely stops and goes again. The second time that the ride stopped they got out of the tram and try to push it to a different point.




the conflict in the book is that the dad kept on yelling at the kids even if they didn't even do anything  and i know this because in the beginning more towards the middle of the book the dad says stuff like "no only you can go on the ride and "no one is allowed in my work ship ever. And this proves that Erin's dad is a mean and angry person because of him yelling too much at Erin and Marty " He is Crazy" says Erin. The conflict in the book is person vs person  and that proves that the dad is very mean and angry towards the kids in the book.











1 comment:

  1. Adriana,
    Good job on your blogs and getting caught up. Please make sure to re-read your writing before you publish. Clearly state what you have to simple sentences. I hope you are enjoying this book; it seems like it.

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